Question

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What does the story begin with?
The story begins with children playing railroad.
  What is the family like?
It's a united and happy family, that includes both parents and 3 children.   What has changed in their life?
They have moved to the village into a modest house.
  What challenge does the family face? The head of the family was arrested by mistake.
  Is there any connection between the explosion of the engine and the arrest of the father?
I think yes, there is. Maybe dad was accused of blowing up trains​

Answer 1

Ответ:

Ваш текст почти правильный, но некоторые предложения могут быть улучшены следующим образом:

1. What does the story begin with?

- The story begins with children playing with a toy railroad.

2. What is the family like?

- It's a close-knit and happy family that includes both parents and three children.

3. What has changed in their life?

- They have moved to a modest house in the village.

4. What challenge does the family face?

- The head of the family was mistakenly arrested.

5. Is there any connection between the explosion of the engine and the arrest of the father?

- I think there might be a connection. Perhaps the father was wrongly accused of causing the train explosion.