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I have own room, but it usual. I would like to change the room.

First, I very much love green color. It helps to concentrate; therefore wallpaper in my room will be green. It helps to concentrate, so the Wallpaper in my room will be green.  Near to a window there will be a desktop. In it educational accessories will settle down: writing-books, textbooks the computer etc. Near to a table will be a bookcase with interesting books. Opposite to a case there is a big, soft bed, and opposite the TV. In the end to a room there is a big wardrobe. All furniture in a room will be white color. The flat lamp on a ceiling, and as lateral illumination will shine a room. The room of my dream will be spacious, comfortable and modern.

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I have a room of my own, but it usual. I would like to change my room.

First of all I would like to say that I love green color very much. It helps me to concentrate; therefore wallpaper in my room will be green. It helps to concentrate, so the Wallpaper in my room will be green. (уберите предложение, оно повторяется) Near to a window there will be a desktop. There will be a lot of educational accessories in and on it such as: writing-books, textbooks and a computer, of course. Near to my table will be a bookcase with a lot of  interesting books. Opposite to a case will be a big soft bed, and opposite it there will be a new TV-set. In the corner of my room there will be a big wardrobe. All furniture in a room will be white color. The flat lamp on a ceiling, and as lateral illumination will shine a room. The room of my dream will be spacious, comfortable and modern.